All improvements made have been suggested by other people, after they reviewed the version. Newer ones are at the bottom.
The first draft lacked colour, and didn't really catch the eye. The main picture also covered up the B in the masthead, making it look like 'Cherup Rock' would could sound like 'Cheer up Rock' which would go against the rock theme.
This draft has a block behind the masthead.
The skyline is placed underneath the masthead, turning it into a Tagline.
Alternating coloured text, colour is the same as the block behind the masthead.
Barcode and Price at the bottom of the page.
Reduce the ALL the barcodes!
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